Initial Crime Drama Idea

As in our groups, our task was to produce an opening sequence of a crime drama. My group is produced of myself and two other AS media studies students. Our team name is Anonymous.
The initial outline of our crime drama was as follows:

• A criminal makes his way to a cashpoint, however they do not have enough money in their credit card to make a transaction in order to pay their rent.
• A young women makes a successful transaction, in which the criminal sees and spitefully robs this young lady for her money.
• The young women defends herself in fear, however crosses the criminal and causes her death as he shoots her.
• The criminal in caught and sent to prison, where he reflects on his regretful actions.